Q&A: Can you see if this is right French? ?

Question by Hannah N: Can you see if this is right French? ?
Ok, I have a HUGE French test coming up and I need to make a video of five rooms in my house. In each room I have to show three objects. Can you please check to see if this all makes sense. (Remember, it will be a tour of my house so I am talking to the video and spelling and grammar don’t matter) : ) Thanks soooo much! Merci!!

Bonjour! Je’maplle Hannah. Aujourd’hoi, je suis aller a apportez vous autour de ma maison. Je vivez dans un masion. Il a six chambres, trois salle de bains, duex toilette, un sallon, duex salon a manger, un bereau, un cuisine, une cave, et un garage.
Je suis aller a apportez vous la cuisine, la salon, la salon a manger, la bereau, et la chambre.
Ce est les cusine. Il y a un refrigerateur, un micro-onde, et duex fluere. Dans la salon a manger il y a un table, duex fenetre, et dix chez. Dans la salon il y a huit sofa, un tapis, et un television. Dans la bureau il y a quarte cabinet, duex penture, et un biblioteque. Ce est mon pere et ma mere chambre. Il y a un lit, duex porte, et un armoir. Merci! Aurevioir!

Please answer back in English : ) Thank you sooooo much!!!
Thank you soooo much for your answers! How do you do the best answer rating thing?

Best answer:

Answer by Megan F
well your grammar and spelling is terrible, but apart from that
just fix your grammar and spelling and it should be ok.

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3 thoughts on “Q&A: Can you see if this is right French? ?”

  1. Probably close enough for speaking, BUT….

    At the end you’d normally use C’EST and not CE EST.

    You also have some things like “les cusine” where it shouldn’t be plural (and isn’t spelled correctly).

    You’re flipping gender on cuisine (un and la).

    I’d confirm you have eight sofas.

    You’d also not normally say “mon pere et ma mere chambre” but rather along the lines of “la chambre de mon pere et ma mere.”

    Confirm your genders throughout.

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